UPDATE!!

I had consultation with Alan yesterday. I showed him my storyboards, but he commented that it wasnt detailed enough. He still couldnt understand the story at one go. So, i will be doing up a better storyboards.

He also suggested that, i could write in to a local soccer commentator, to do voice recording for me. But in order to do that, i will have to sell my story with a detailed storyboard, one that anyone can understand without me explaining. Thats all for my storyboard.

Regarding my character designs, Alan urges me to get it done ASAP. to get the style settled. HAHA, i will do my best to get it done soon, because its really difficult to draw. Thanks for all the help Alan=D